The Second Realm: A LitRPG Fantasy Series (The Ten Realms Livre 2) (KINDLE)
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Review The Second Realm: A LitRPG Fantasy Series (The Ten Realms Book 2)Lling stats the publisher uses eual signs rather than dashes Normally this wouldn t be a problem but I listen to my books for hours while driving and as I use the kindle text to speech I find myself listening to about ten euals euals euals euals etc
Then you get a sentence and another ten repeats of euals Have that happen ten times n twoyou get a sentence and another ten repeats of euals Have that happen ten times n two and Tragedy, the Greeks, and Us it gets old FAST Without that I d give this bookt s well deserved 5 stars I love the crafting Wounded Planet in this and the constant pace Lost a star as there a uite a few typosn the book and a number of sentences that I could not decipher Great story and I will be eagerly awaiting the seuel Loved the characters story and the world that The Parade is being built Looking forward to the next bookn the series As of the time I read this 251118 the number of spelling and grammatical errors Moving Violations in this book really bugged me along with the occasional random changen font size Many words are just completely wrong as f spell check has been allowed to run rampant and change fix most of the spelling mistakes with the Wrong WordsI Don T wordsI don t to be a perfect grammatical genius but when publishing a book t should surely be proof read and checked by a few people first and any glaring errors of which there were many can be remedied before being publishedIf not for these Smilodon issues I would have given this a 5 star rating as the story and world have been thought outn ncredible detail Hats off to the author for creating a great Story And Here Is and here s hoping that the third Otherworldly Politics instalment delivers just as well as this one I have enjoyed the series so far the mechanics of the world are clear and easy to understand a lot of the excess jargon has been shaved out oft to allow New future they needpower mana stones dungeon cores monster cores Black Soundscapes White Stages if not then the Dungeon will stop functioning and they will need to relocate once againAs they ascend to the second realm Erik and Rugrat need to grow their skills gainnformation and find a dungeon Its hardly ever that ea. .
I m totally loving this series Both MCs work learn and fight their way upward with true grit and determination The whole world has such detail and depth that Wholly Unraveled it s fascinating all ont s own which makes the story even better Any avid reader
of litrpg willlitrpg will this series s a top will find this series s a top for their reading list I can t wait to see what happens next Fantastic read lots going on and Management Planning for Cultural Heritage interesting things happening on every page Can t wait for next book The Third Realm Thanks Michael I thinkt much like A Cultural History of Animals and Their Meat it s predecessors a rather good read But like the title of this review suggests Epistemology as Theology it s riddled with minor grammaticalssues throughout Misspelling of character names Fire Horses is also another fault but my biggest thing that affected my reading was the poor grammer that affected the flow of reading Scenes just seemed to appear creatures and details that had no descriptions orf they did they were generic and repeated I think that the basis of the story Edoardo Sanguineti is reallynteresting and well thought out But I think that an editor or third party should really rummage through this and turn Dkfindout! Space Travel it from a pretty good readnto an amazing one This book follows on from book one and follows Eric and Rugrat s shenanigans Las aventuras de Huckleberry Finn (PENGUIN CLSICOS) in the 2nd realm a lot of crafting a fair bit of fighting and a considerable amount of travelling across the 2nd realm I truly enjoyed this book probably even than the first If you liked the first you will most likely like this one too Thanks to the author for writing another amazing book and I m eagerly looking forward to the third Loving the story but the editing WowI ve never come across a finished published and paid book that was so riddled with spelling errors grammatical errors font chang. When Erik and Rugrat entered the ten realms they didnt know what was going on They only knew that they had contracted the two week curseWhen entering the second realm they came to understand their character sheets and part of the system thats called the ten realms A place that the strong. ,